In modern scenario, numerous individuals are travelling to different destinations due to the advancement of globalization and industrialization. Technological achievements enable people to travel for personal, commercial and recreational purposes. According to my perception, there are innumerable benefits of travelling. Reasonable means of transportation makes it affordable for people to explore the world.
To commence the discussion, in this rapid growing and scientific era, technological advancements have enthralled the world. Firstly, Cheaper and faster means of transport have aspired the present generation to explore the world and enhance their perspective. Moreover, travelling offers tremendous opportunities to individuals to get relaxation from their hectic and overburdened professional responsibilities. Travelling plays an essential role to refresh people and gain more concentration. Besides, business tycoons travel overseas looking for comprehensive opportunities to expand their business. Also, travelling gives a remarkable chance to visit splendid places and comprehend their cultures and traditions.
Reinforcing my perspective further, globalization plays an indispensable role in unprecedented development of tourism. People prefer to travel for education, business and recreation. In modern era, globalization has unlocked new horizons and provided ample opportunities. For instance, it is through globalization that numerous students in India get admissions in diverse overseas international educational institutions in pursuit of higher studies. Moreover, globalization has acquainted new territories for international business relations. It also gives people an access to propagate their cultures and traditions to other nations.
To recapitulate, travelling helps to rejuvenate and promote human living standards. Besides, it offers people remarkable approach to explore the world and also to access ample time for recreation and commercial development. That’s the reason numerous people are travelling more as compared to the primitive days.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...usiness relations. It also gives people an access to propagate their cultures and traditi...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 278, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...son numerous people are travelling more as compared to the primitive days.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.4928057554 5.12529762239 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62105170132 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2387251277 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6315789474 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52631578947 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296271529733 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987415067763 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924155487673 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199532802967 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575551551917 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.77 12.4159519038 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.