Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that the communication skill is decreased because of lacking interaction when the increasing number of people uses mobile phone and computer. While I agree with this, I also believe that it is not suit for all people.
On the one hand, I agree that spending too much time in private electronics equipment has a variety of negative impacts on developing the ability of communication. Firstly, some people today are sending messages via email or sms instead of speaking, so it seems they do not need to say anything. That is a reason explains why they do not know how to read non-verbal emotional cues and eye contact, which can help their professional career in the future. Secondly, keeping eyes glued to screen of electronic gadgets have results in decreasing the interactions of people. For instance, in many families, parents do not talk to their children enough and always care about news or films on the internet, therefore, children will suffer from speech problems and have difficulties to learn literacy skills at kindergarten or higher education levels.
On the other hand, I believe that not all people using electronic devices will decrease their communication skill. Many young people can talk online with their friends for hours, and their stories are not boring. As a result, they can gradually improve their communication skills. In addition, online applications such as Facebook or Skype can encourage people to interact more frequently through live streaming. As a result, they will improve their speaking skills. Furthermore, when people live in foreign country, it is difficult for them to share feelings or talk to their family members without mobile phone or computer.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that the communication skill can be lost when people access computer and mobile phone, but this is by no means this would affect everybody's social development.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17041800643 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82364548258 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601286173633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2017172906 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19368871515 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660177117428 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509041283211 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121980359913 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297948825251 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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