It has recently discussed that tourist are tempted to visit places with hard conditions such as some special deserts or Antarctic. As it is going to be a trend among people, it is worth talking a bit about the advantages and the drawbacks.
To start with the benefits, it should be said that as people are interested in having exceptional experience, it can be considered as a way for individuals to have another kind of adventure. Not only does this help them to get more knowledge of the environment, it could widen their horizons and be aware of how big the earth is. It is sometimes an opportunity for tourists to take fantastic photos which could be shared with others at a later time in order to publicize such activities and possibly make others be conscious of the environmental issues causing by human activities.
On the other hand, it could have negative effects on the environment itself, as people interfere in the nature and make some incremental changes to these untouched areas. Consequently, they may make the life of inhabitants there, a misery. Although doing some research by scientists and getting information about the ecosystem and the possibilities of retaining the spices is essential, sometimes an excessive amount of people’s activities could have detrimental effects. For example people may drop litters and plastics, or making the weather polluted by smoking, which could have definitely negative impacts on the inhabitants as well as the environment. In addition, sometimes people take the possible dangers in such remote areas for granted.
In conclusion, as visiting unique places with difficult situations may appeals to people, there are numbers of merits and downsides which are worth to be considered.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, well, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17605633803 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97609999768 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.907886802 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.636363636 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163313168903 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669274425011 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101386875303 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122147361143 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814174938014 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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