In previous time, people got marriage in younger age then had children as soon as possible. As we can see, these days, people prefer to have family in older age like thirty, also this would have some advantageous and drawbacks for society.
To bring with, this issue has some positive effects on community. For instant, adults in age of thirty are mature enough to manage the situation and make a living. In fact, they can make a better decision about their life as well their children. Hence, this is the reason why the rate of divorce is low in this age. Other example that I can mention is about how marriage in older age can decrease the population density over decades. Sometime, this could be helpful for government to control the population, however, always is not useful idea.
On the other hand, some negative ways of this matter can influence on society. Firstly, there would be some problems of reproduction because women in older age, their ovum is damaged. This can be one of the infertile problem; nevertheless, majority of this trouble are curable. Secondly, rate of elder population will be increased. Indeed, this subject has several consequences in future like rising demand youth forces or lack of financial support for consumers (older people). Therefore, this can be heavy burden on government shoulder to handle.
In conclusion, although, today's marriage age in thirty or more is deniable and it would have advantageous, there would be some negative points that impact on society and people's lifestyle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99215686275 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59381454515 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2262528363 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158435154306 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567113904956 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344034229 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101369668027 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170316243171 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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