today online shopping is growing what are the effects of this trend on the environment and type of the job?
Today, more consumers buy online than they do in e-retail stores; online shopping is no longer a fad or a passing phase. This inclination causes some effects on the environment and type of vocation. In this essay, we will get a clear picture of the pros and cons effect of online shopping.
Electronic shopping has the undeniable impact on the environment. Many people believe brick and mortar businesses are reduced, resulting in good changes in ecosystem pollution patterns; with eliminating physical stores, many of the environmental cause in the construction physical processes and transportation of personal vehicles and plastic packaging has been declined. However, others consider e-shop is not removed cars, also cause overcrowding in the streets. In traditional trade one container would deliver the object to the shop; modern days, devices, even smaller, deliver to separate the addresses with a wasteful large box. Others consequences of online shopping are global warming and environmental poisoning. The content of the sites is stored in large data centres, requiring a lot of electricity to operate and cool. Infrastructures of e-shop need computer chips, making the industrial process and usually produce a lot of toxic materials, being harmful and should not be allowed to enter the groundwater.
Moreover, e-trade completely changes the face of jobs. Many people do not use any particular knowledge to work as a shopper and a dealer. In contrast, a position which exists in the e-market, requirement academic knowledge and sophisticated. Besides, this phenomenon creates teleworker and self-employment. A good illustration is in the society women have some limitation, they could sell own creativity via the internet, such as handicraft and earn income. For instance, in IRAN some people use telegram and Instagram for selling food, or Baluchistan females provide their needlework via that app to all over the world.
In conclusion, these are some effect associated with online shopping in surroundings and jobs opportunity. Due to enhance the services, are offered to customers, this trend makes life easier and will bring slight benefits in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47041420118 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06062050085 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633136094675 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4143617129 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.722222222 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253401170393 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707660622378 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821301731374 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164291719314 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123578953765 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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