Topic 13: Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that it is better for employees in a firm to spend at least a 4-week period on holiday every year, which helps them to perform well at the workplace. From my perspective, giving nearly a month-off for holiday can be beneficial, but it also brings negative effects on the staff in the work environment.
On the one hand, the benefits of having a 4-week holiday are varied. Firstly, employees in offices can reduce the amount of pressure they have gained when working. Thanks to the long holiday, they can take part in some outside or recreational activities, which provide them with the relaxation. For some individuals, it is the time to come back to their hometowns or enjoy the family's reunion with other members. Secondly, after going back to work, they may work and produce efficiently. The reason is that their demands for relaxation are fulfilled, and all negative factors leading to some seriously metal illnesses are eliminated.
From the opposite angle, this kind of holiday can cause some detrimental aspects. By the time the holiday ends, the employees' mental and physical abilities become passive since it took them a long time without exposing to their regular tasks such as typing a report or conducting a research. Additionally, it is easy to notice that their workload is usually stopped or interrupted by the distraction. This leads to the fact that the capacity in the working environment is not effective and affect badly the company's achievement.
In conclusion, although a 4-week holiday may make the employees comfortable, the employers should consider carefully before making a decision, as it may negatively influence both staffs and workplaces.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...s such as typing a report or conducting a research. Additionally, it is easy to notice tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, well, at least, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13357400722 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82912281995 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5281314193 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23622972558 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701927360447 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06683556558 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145161200109 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592196697034 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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