Tourism is causing environmental problems all around the world.
What are the main causes of this? What are some solutions?
Environmental pollution is arguably the most discussed topic in the world today. There are many reasons which might be harmful to the environment these days. One of the most serious reasons that people have been blaming is tourism. This essay will discuss some of the main negative impacts that tourism has on the environment and suggest a couple of solutions.
Firstly, tourism development can have a big effect on the local natural resources. Tourism is the industry that usually tends to overuse water, mainly for the hotels, swimming pools, or for the personal use of tourists. This can result in the shortage of fresh water by the excessive use of the industry and might produce a greater volume of waste water. Furthermore, the exploitation of land for tourism purposes has led to land degradation and more seriously, caused some natural disasters such as erosion, flooding, etc. In addition, the loss of biodiversity can be another effect of land comsumption. The consequences of these problems has threatened thousands of species and put them on the IUCN Red List.
Raising environmental awareness can be one of the perfect solutions to reduce harm to the natural world. Tourism has the potential to enhance public appreciation and spread the awareness of environmental problems. People can have a chance to be in the nature on their tours, thus they might change their attitudes towards the negative things that they have been doing to the natural world around them. When there is awareness, protection and preservation can happen to nature and biological diversity. The government themselves can help in protecting the environment, by teaching the students at schools or by educating their citizens through the help of the media.
In conclusion, the development of tourism has caused a lot of negative impacts on the natural world, which might include water pollution, water shortage and other natural disasters. There might be some measures that we as individuals and our governments can take in order to solve these problems, which are improving self-awareness and having the protection and preservation of the nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22674418605 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89551227707 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514534883721 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0129325945 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.764705882 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186310007206 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579602372595 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452666804242 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112066352654 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167560713624 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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