Tourism is an ever growing industry.
What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?
Tourism has become a lucrative industry and fertile ground for investment. The primary benefit that individuals may gain from traveling to other places is that this broadens their horizons. For society, it is considered a source of stable income for many nations around the globe.
On a personal level, traveling to and vacationing abroad enables people to discover other cultures, languages, rituals and traditions. In other words, having such an informative and memorable experience makes people more flexible and open to accept others from different backgrounds. Tourism is a great way to strengthen one’s personality, become more responsible and self confident especially for young teenagers. For example, a study carried out by the University of Birmingham revealed that spending a year abroad for secondary school graduates is highly recommended because it teaches them self reliance and develop a sense of responsibility.
In many nations, tourism has become an asset to their economy and vital to local businesses. That is to say, many local businesses and activities are relying on tourism that enables them to operate and yield profits, such as craft making businesses, restaurants and many other trade activities. On a national level, governments cater for tourism because it has become an integral part of the annual GDP and any failure in this sector will have a drastic effect on a national economy. For example, a terrorism action that was perpetrated in Egypt slashed down the number of incoming tourists in 2016 and this has severely affected the economy and more than 30% of locals lost their jobs.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that tourism leaves a great impact on people’s personal attitudes, improve their interpersonal skills and provides them with the opportunity to explore new avenues beyond their areas of interest. Also, tourism has become an indispensable source of income to community dwellers and governments as whole.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92729692658 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581168831169 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9806261341 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.153846154 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135226810066 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558147807266 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460251624262 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883953295519 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026891181237 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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