Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside.
Do you agree or disagree?
There has been a discussion about the method which tackles traffic and housing problems. While I believe that replace big companies, factories and their employees from urban to suburb. However, I argue that there are various methods which can solve this issue with a similar effects.
It can be not denied the positive effect relocate method brings. To begin with the fact that moving business from urban area to rural area can shrink the urban population who have crowded life in the big city. The decrease of population leading to the number of private transport is declined significantly and this make the traffic situation is improved. At the same time, this solution could make release pressure on urban housing supply systems. This way enables the citizen to improve their living standard
However, in my perspective, I think the mentioned problem can be addressed by other measures. To address the traffic matter, the government should encourage people to use public vehicle instead of private transport. This way also limit the number of people who drive personal cars and bring equally effective the method which the topic mentioned. Another solution should be considered is that the cities authorities need to pay more attention to road maintenance, especial the roads are in poor condition. In matter of housing, the government should consider constructing the high-rise building to make the best use of urban land area. There are more people living in the constant space.
In conclusion, I believe that the moving business to the countryside is one of effective way to solve traffic and housing problem in the big cities. Besides, I hold the viewpoint that it is should combined the other solutions to tackle these matter in a more comprehensive manner
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, while, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62888348242 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546712802768 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2404852459 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168792059106 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554192412545 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586579955539 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111172585177 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444627562625 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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