Traffic congestion is an alarming problem. Please identify solutions to reduce the current traffic congestion.
Traffic congestion is one of the complicated problems in our country today. It has too much impact on human life because it happens with high frequency and it should be resolved as soon as possible. Personally, using public transport, raising awareness of traffic, and building a viable transport system are feasible solutions to traffic congestion.
Using public transportation is a viable solution to reduce traffic congestion. In fact, a bus can carry more than 30 people while a motorbike can only carry a maximum of two people. That way, a car with more people traveling on the road will be less crowded than 30 motorcycles on the road. In addition, public transport provides passengers with other benefits such as a balance of household budgets,a friendlier environmental and reduced risk of pollution.
Raising traffic awareness can also reduce traffic congestion. In fact, if everyone obeys the traffic rules, the traffic will not be disorderly, especially during rush hour. Traffic awareness can be developed by means of television, phones, radios, social networks, and so that each individual is responsible for adhering strictly to the rules rather than being in breach of them. If not, violators will be severely punished for deterrence.
Creating a viable road system is a way to reduce traffic disturbances. It can be said that building many roads and widening small roads is an effective solution. In fact, public transport may still encounter congestion during peak hours. Therefore, expanding and building many roads, not only highways but also overpasses should be built to minimize the problem of traffic congestion in the heart of the city.Moreover, the road between cities and towns should be connected to be easily moved.
In short, traffic congestion causes traffic concerns. In fact, many different solutions have been proposed. However, for the long-term solutions are the use of public transport, public awareness and construction of road systems. The city will get better when we implement those solutions to immediately stop this problem
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...s such as a balance of household budgets,a friendlier environmental and reduced ri...
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Line 4, column 409, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...fic congestion in the heart of the city.Moreover, the road between cities and towns shou...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...stion causes traffic concerns. In fact, many different solutions have been proposed. However, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, as to, in addition, in fact, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34250764526 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90387222249 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553516819572 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4247515076 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9473684211 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292124227689 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110599988736 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106458346801 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181899772005 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578183735186 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...s such as a balance of household budgets,a friendlier environmental and reduced ri...
^^
Line 4, column 409, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...fic congestion in the heart of the city.Moreover, the road between cities and towns shou...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...stion causes traffic concerns. In fact, many different solutions have been proposed. However, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, as to, in addition, in fact, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34250764526 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90387222249 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553516819572 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4247515076 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9473684211 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292124227689 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110599988736 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106458346801 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181899772005 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578183735186 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.