travelling
The transportation is best way to travel
anywhere, in cheap rates. There are
many types of vehicles in
transportation, like, Trains,buses and
cabs, etc. All the transportation had
there on prices buses and cabs are
more expensive than trains.
Travelling is now getting more popular
in all countries.In america there are
many peoples loving to travelling.In
2009 american peoples have their own
reasons for travel and they also have
some issues about travelling. Two
types of travels in america first one is
travel by transportation and the second
one is tourists.
In america all people can not afford
their own cars. so, poor peoples are
using transportation for their use. that
causes also are humans would likes
traveling a lot because tourists are travelling for fun and it is very interesting
than any other activities. By travelling
people can get out of their frustration.
With travelling, Peoples can watch a lot
of beautiful places.
When any family is going for tourists
travel they are like to use more than
transportation because the
transportation can interrupt their own
fun that is not good for their
enjoyment. Americans had so many
issues about their transportaion services, their
government is the big reason of that
kind of issues in america 2009 that year most public
want a well tourist to go for some
interesting destinations. america is a
hole of amazing scenarios, but
"burrberry hills and james" lakes which
are most popular places of america.
Lastly, america is a big country in their
currency values and their reputation in
the world. america's facilities are
getting fluctuate sometime. But all over
the whole america is leading to another
countries in this world. In my piece of
writing travelling is a fun by great
services. issues are also would be
produce by governments ignorence only government could fix these type of issues<br>
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
The transportation is best way to travel anywhere, in cheap rates...
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Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , buses
...ehicles in transportation, like, Trains,buses and cabs, etc. All the transportation ...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... getting more popular in all countries.In america there are many peoples loving ...
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Line 11, column 35, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... are many peoples loving to travelling.In 2009 american peoples have their own ...
^^
Line 20, column 17, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... people can not afford their own cars. so, poor peoples are using transportation...
^^
Line 21, column 37, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...re using transportation for their use. that causes also are humans would likes tr...
^^^^
Line 22, column 30, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'like'
Suggestion: like
...use. that causes also are humans would likes traveling a lot because tourists are t...
^^^^^
Line 39, column 27, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: America
... go for some interesting destinations. america is a hole of amazing scenarios, but &...
^^^^^^^
Line 46, column 12, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Americas
...ues and their reputation in the world. americas facilities are getting fluctuate somet...
^^^^^^^^
Line 51, column 11, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Issues
...travelling is a fun by great services. issues are also would be produce by governmen...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, second, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42671009772 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01368247168 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527687296417 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.2831097373 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 47.0 4.38176352705 1073% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270157949612 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107113994874 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142425023461 0.0667982634062 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701071174693 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146231948474 0.056905535591 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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