Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In my opinion, I believe that both men and women should have an equal education opportunity. However, I personally do not agree that higher education systems should try to balance the number of male and female students in their all course.
It is appearance that trying to have the same number of male and female students in each course is simply unrealistic. If education systems might want to fill their course with the same number of students between men and women, they have to have enough candidates for each gender. This is impractical in reality, many courses verily attract female students than the others such as nursing course. If the university header tries to fill fifty per cent of the course by male students, many women might lose the chance to reach the admission despite of their strong qualifications.
Apart from the practical concern mentioned above, I also advocate that it is unfair to base admission on gender. Institutions should continuously give admission to applicants according to their grades and certifications. Therefore, both men and women aware that they have the same opportunities to pass the university entrance exams if they are hard-working enough to achieve good grades in high school. If a woman is the best candidates for a place on a course, it surely wrong if she is rejected in favor of a male student with lower grades and fewer qualifications.
In conclusion, the selection of universities should be based on candidates’ certifications and achievements rather than gender. It would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'wrongs'?
Suggestion: wrongs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08270676692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97436614711 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518796992481 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2858683043 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194858915426 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764199949868 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727362616166 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124492564537 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793913343861 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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