Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that each domain in the university should have the same number of men and women in the class. I totally disagree with the argument and will elaborate on the reasons below.
To begin with, the policy of equal gender in the class may affect not only the operation of the school but also the teaching quality in the classroom. The main drawback is that some schools may not be able to recruit enough students as some subjects may be less attractive to one of the genders, causing the organizations cannot collect enough admission fee to pay the salary or to renew the crucial facilities under the policy. Furthermore, even some collages try to draw sufficient scholar by lowering admission requirement, the professors may find it difficult to teach due to diverse unqualified learners in the class. It will then heart the reputation of the school on teaching which is extremely important in recruiting seasons, creating a vicious cycle.
In addition, we should allow pupils to enter the sector on which they have passion based on their motivations and abilities rather than on their sexuality. First, it is undeniable that the way of thinking and the preference of interest differed in boys and girls. Hence, some domains are naturally more popular for different genders. Second, if individuals can choose study topic what they love without the restriction of limited positions in the domain, they will become more productive in learning as well as in future career developing.
In conclusion, in my opinion, universities should not set equal quantity of admission for both genders because it will have the negative effect on operations and teaching quality in class. Additionally, they have to recruit the students only on the base of their motivations and talents but not of what gender they are.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, so, then, well, even so, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02649006623 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73067005016 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7986208753 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104693990761 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373681865524 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375086932241 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745279048333 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428776331876 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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