universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The disproportion between male and female seems to be an endless issue in the university. Many people believe that university should be accepted impartial number between two genre but some situation have not expected data in their student number. In addition, this essay below will analyze entire this problem.
It is true that, the lopsidedness number of male and female should be accepted by university. For instant from Asian culture that there are almost female students in the literature department and all of student in mathematics department are male, so the problem is when they take part in some university community activities or competition the class lack of boy will have no force to do a man-working and opposite with class has completely male they become to be incapable with women-working. In general, the problem is seen by two view from two kinds of genres will approach to be more abundant. Nowadays so many universities also call in application globally with no demand which kind of genre they are. In conclude I obviously agree that university should not distinguish from male or female.
On the contrary, the problem is not every subject can accept to dispose of student’s genre. It is cumbersome for a female to adapt with the thorny condition to become a pilot. This is a subject which male student dominantly amount to 99.99%. Beside male is also restricted with occupation that is demand soft and niggle skills, for example nurse, teacher for little children and so forth. Therefore, every subject require particular ability to achieve the best level for society.
In conclusion, university should accept equal number of male and female student is absolutely the best but I also depend on the characteristic of each subject.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'genre' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'genres'.
Suggestion: genres
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, kind of, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1107266436 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82774127814 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543252595156 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.3895896668 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348191614086 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126328180575 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107779316774 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240243806085 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900340414686 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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