Universities should provide students with the skills they will require in order to succeed at their future
jobs.
How far do you agree or disagree with the above opinion?
What are some of the job skills that employers look for in new employees?
Humans physical and psychological features corrupt by the time they get older. In ancient times it is seen that older people get respect for their experience and for their oldness in order to honor and make happy them. So helping them and ignoring their mistakes is crucial.
Nowadays most of the people do not respect to older people enough because of their lack of respect which can be taught by parents. Even though parents try to teach their children about respect the internet corrupts the generations in bad way. There are lots of content that bullies with older people and make fun of their corrupted reflexes. It affects the children even the young ones in a bad way. However, some of the people tries to respect their older ones more in some countries, and it is because of their culture. The education system are all alike around the world which shows that countries are relating eachother during deciding the education system, and most of the universities have to comply to these systems including the most famous ones. However, improving some skills rather than positive science is crucial for students too.
Most of the employers want their employees to have some certain skills such as leadership, self-confidence, keeping calm under pressure etc.. But do employees can learn these skill from somewhere especially the inexperienced ones? This is where the problem starts. Normally a person should improve him/herself during having education however, some people have problems of doing this which is normal. Not every humanbeing is able to teach his/herself. So there must be a place for these skills to be taught to these people. Universities are the best suitable place for this education. Nonetheless especially in some certain jobs, skill comes more important than the job itself.
Universities should have special section for this education which must be based on desire. No one should be forced to have these education because it may be resulted badly due to human nature. There must be some professional teachers to improve students skills which is desired by employers. Most of the time lack of leadership resulted in companies to be closed in some kind of economical crisis. Leadership is related to crisis management. If a person does not have this skill by birth then it should be taught to him/her.
In conclusion education must be done in correct places. If it is done in wrong places, eventually it will be resulted badly, and will affect the companies.
The older people should be shown respect due to the experience of life. However, it should not be the only reason the fact that some of the older people lose their faith in life. People show respect to ignite the older ones will to live since most of the older people think only about death. Giving them hope, making them happy satisfies the humans soul.
In conclusion if someone wants to be shown respect when he/she gets older, he/she must show respect to older people while he/she is young, and respecting is not a hard thing too. It is the most crucial manner that people must have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, then, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2566.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 520.0 315.596192385 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93461538462 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48764996872 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453846153846 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.0 506.74238477 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 16.0721442886 199% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7336887409 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1875 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168462201206 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500540890319 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043868417658 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824370142177 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564164981474 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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