Version 2 - Quang Truong - People in many countries are spending less time with their family. causes and solutions
Family is always an indispensable part of every people. However, it seems that individuals are spending just a fraction of time together with their families every day. This essay will analyze the causes and possible solutions for this phenomenon.
The two main reasons for the restriction of time for the family are the fast pace of life and leaving home. When people have to work fulltime, they will not have enough time with their family. As a result, they are being pulled away from their home. For example, my father usually goes to work in the early morning and comes home very late at night. Therefore, we do not have much time to have deep conversations. Furthermore, when people decide to move far from their family, they just able to come home on some extraordinary holidays of the year. Consequently, their precious time with family will be decreased.
Some potential solutions to tackle this problem are balancing work-life and keeping in touch with family. By rearranging time, people's tasks could be done quickly. Therefore, they will have more time to improve their family bond. Moreover, thanks to the advantage of social media, they can talk with their family members at a far distance, which eventually enhances the quality of family time.
In conclusion, it is clear that hectic schedules and moving away from home are the major causes of the phenomenon that many people are spending less time with their family, and there are some solutions to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... leaving home. When people have to work full time, they will not have enough time with th...
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Line 2, column 335, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ning and comes home very late at night. Therefore we do not have much time to talk. Furth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83884297521 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37813058692 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574380165289 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7990654104 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0666666667 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353609820672 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121422792865 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843587207395 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248015004902 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587414408543 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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