Violence in the news encourage crime in the community. The writer disagree that media enhance people for committing sin. This essay will discuss the main reason for educating people the importance of media coverage.
It is clear that unlawful act are increasing in our society these days, some of those criminals was not afraid to commit it, despite the punishment they will acquired. When the scene of the crime broadcast on the television most of the people will be aware of the happenings in the surroundings they lived. However, the citizens will be able to familiarize the act on how the criminals will commit sin and learn to avoid the incidence. According to the survey of Philippine National Police 2013 around 50% of the population decide to took a media on the crime scene for public awareness.
On the other hand, once a crime was done and the suspect immediately runaway, the victim will ask assistance in the police station and will provide details and give authorization to the media for posting it to the public and report directly to the police officials for crime punishment. For article SOCO 2012 30% of the society reported case s of illegal act for further investigation with the help of broadcasting.
IN conclusion, be observant enough for the people that surrounds us. Hence, do not keep it to yourselves be brave to open up with the law and let the criminals suffer for punishment. I agree to coordinate with the authorize personnel in the government for justice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'disagrees'.
Suggestion: disagrees
...rage crime in the community. The writer disagree that media enhance people for committin...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'acquire'
Suggestion: acquire
...it it, despite the punishment they will acquired. When the scene of the crime broadcast ...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pite the punishment they will acquired. When the scene of the crime broadcast on the...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: a medium; media
...nd 50% of the population decide to took a media on the crime scene for public awareness...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... punishment. I agree to coordinate with the authorize personnel in the government for justice...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8937007874 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7515291461 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1513715554 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.583333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0760003675584 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370252162274 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447685781363 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573966291958 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553487240966 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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