Visual pollution is the major cause of accidents on roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
visual pollution refers to the impacts of pollution that impair one's ability to enjoy a vista or view.Visual pollution disturbs the visual areas of people by creating harmful changes in the natural environment. In the current time of technological advancements, one of the most pressing concern is regarding the given topic is that how visual pollution is the major cause of the accidents? I completely agree with the statement and explore the dimensions of the topic through examples and observations.
To the begin, it is evident that pollition is increased day by day in our country. It can create harmful effects to our health and the society also. It have a great impact on aquatic life also. There are different types of pollutions and visual pollution is one of them. Visual pollution disturbs the visaul areas of people by creating harmful changes in the environment. one of the main reason of the visual pollution is buildings. The buildings which are made of glass mirror can reflect the light in the sunlight and create dangerous accidents of the road. For example, when we go outside on any vehical, the mirror or glass of the buildings can reflect the light which can cause accidents on road. A survey is conducted by the reasearches that 30 out 0f 50 persons can affected by the visual pollution.
Secondly, there is one more effect of visual pollution. Billboards and advertisements on highway roads can distract drivers and cause accidents. for instance, we usually seen that, there are very big billboards and advertisements on the roads which can attract the drivers of the vehicals and distract them which becomes the reason for the road accidents. Another cause of visual pollution is the antennas. It cause disease to the people. From anteenas, harmful radiations are released which cause dangerous diseases.
As we seen that, there are number of answers to this question. On balance, I tend to believe that there are so many causes of the visual pollution so government should have to take some measure to reduce the effect of this pollution. They should have to take pledge to banned the buildings made up of glasses and also should have to banned to the billboards on the highway roads.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95174262735 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73277551482 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445040214477 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3652790404 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9523809524 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2380952381 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236886733976 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780594290323 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715025965759 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147795637048 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610096292501 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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