Although It is disposable that health is one of the best treasure human have been given, they did no pay inadequate attention to it. Physical exercise like walking is an example, instead of doing it as a good habit, most of the people are unwillingly to do it. This essay will mention the causes and solutions for this dilemma.
The highlight that need to be pointed is this problem is triggered by a whole host of reasons. Firstly, when the rapid growth of technology gradually becomes the domination of modern-life people, they are more likely to lead an unhealthy sedentary lifestyle. After a strenuous day, individuals tend to stick themselves with smartphones which take into account as indispensable items. In this way, it is highly possible that they spend the rest of the time indulging in entertainment to relieve stress in lieu of doing several physical exercises. In addition, due to being caught up in the hustle and bustle of life, rising rates of depression and anxiety is one of the main reasons which make people become less active and more passive. Besides, working out also requires encouragement. Research has found that take accordance with natural instinct, human definitely deserves inspiration from others before starting a new task. Take walking as an example. Compared going outside alone in the early morning with a group of friends walking together, which will be more motivated? All the reasons have been mentioned, I firmly think they are the primary culprit for the no-exercise lifestyle.
With a view to preventing this unhealthy lifestyle, we need to take these solutions into account. In the first place, it is advisable to learn how to manage time. Human does not have a great number of time to exercise in virtue of hectic schedule, so that make a specific plan and squeeze in fifteen or thirty minutes per day for physical activity will be a useful way. Furthermore, over-dependence on the Internet should be decreased. Only by reducing moments for virtual life, can they have more time for a healthy and balanced life. In addition, searching for same-thought friends is not unnecessary. It is beneficial to engage in walking clubs or sport centers, where is full of energetic enthusiasts who will inspire them to try harder.
To sum up, that problem is caused by the reasons has been outlined above and I totally believe that this dilemma will be addressed soon by taking these solutions into account.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, thus, in addition, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9902200489 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76425304994 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581907090465 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0703627309 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1904761905 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4761904762 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253403775553 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689662676571 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507903177414 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160182608368 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195544789346 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, thus, in addition, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9902200489 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76425304994 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581907090465 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0703627309 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1904761905 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4761904762 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253403775553 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689662676571 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507903177414 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160182608368 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195544789346 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.