Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, entertainment can be enjoyed live on the sport or through the screen of TV. While I advocate the comfort at home, I also admit the benefits of the experience of being present at the events.
On the one hand, convenience is the foremost reason holding one’s foot in front of the screen. This choice costs nothing but a TV set, which is cost-effective. Audiences can enjoy the events without paying the entrance tickets or having to be in the long queue. This homemade amusement is especially suitable for those having a hectic schedule. In addition, thank to the advancement in technology, viewers can still have enjoyable experience when watching broadcasted shows such as high-definition images, real-time commentary, surrounding sound. They can even get a better view via close-up footage. Therefore, it is obvious that watching events at home is no different, if not better, from eye-to-eye experience.
On the other hand, being present at the venues also offer irreplaceable advantages. First, the people attending the football matches or concerts can truly immerse in the exciting atmosphere there and enjoy all of the pleasure such as applause, cheers, the sense of community They will not miss any single moment, and can be an actual part of the event, which can not be replicated by anything else. Furthermore, by joining in these events, people will have the chance to interact with those who have mutual interests, allowing them to expand social relationships. This will act as a booster to improve mental health and quality of life.
In conclusion, it seems to me that watching a live performance and a TV show are equally pleasant, so it depends on each individual’s preference.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...the exciting atmosphere there and enjoy all of the pleasure such as applause, cheers, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10714285714 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9774578254 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4720287959 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144137712231 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439333374656 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051416735886 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885691012872 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298393607148 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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