We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
Nowadays computer is a common thing in our life that used for facilitating people jobs. It has many uses for the future and using it also has good impacts for people. Also, the dependency of people to computers is increasing every day but I could find it as a good thing.
There are two things that might use computers in the future. First, it could help some companies to provide great services to their customers. The increased number of user's questions cause staff could not handle all of it. Usually, this problem could be found in e-commerce when users are not satisfied with the products that they bought. The engineers could rely on computers by creating a system that could answers the questions automatically. Second, computers might be used for public services. At these time, some people still do not have national ID card because they have no time to care it. In addition, most people do not like to spend long time queue. Therefore, to solve this problem local state could build online public service that could be accessed by people anytime and anywhere they want.
Moreover, there are two reasons why the dependency to the computer could be seen as a good thing. Firstly, by use computer every day, it would increase peoples' skill. For example, students who like programming could improve their skill in many programming languages. They could create some application that helps people in doing their activities.
Second, people could do many things in same time. Such as career women who have children could remain working. As a result, they could do their job remotely simultaneously take care of their children.
All in all, I think the dependency to the computers is a good thing but people remain to manage their time and do not take too much time of using computers because it could damage our health and society. In addition, people need to take a time for relaxing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'answer'
Suggestion: answer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46738536361 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510769230769 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4136501948 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9047619048 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4761904762 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218912858561 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838557788111 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730931989517 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146536587764 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614173741396 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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