As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Apart from making revenue, businesses are supposed to take responsibility for the society as well. In my opinion, I completely agree with this idea as companies should not neglect their impacts on society to prioritize their profits
On the one hand, I understand that money is the first and foremost aim of every business, which also brings a number of benefits to society. If companies generate more profit, they have to pay more taxes, hence, contributing to more facilities like schools, hospitals, theaters, etc. All in all, they can potentially improve people’s living standards. Moreover, businesses that can make a lot of money can expand their markets beyond the national borders, therefore providing more job opportunities and consequently increasing the employment rate
On the other hand, manufacturers should not be blinded by material factors to do harm to society. In fact, there are some companies that willingly trade their integrity for personal benefits, which may seriously deteriorate the environment and the community's health. For example, chemical waste released before undergoing proper treatment has caused pollution to many rivers as well as killed numerous species, and damage the health of people living near those rivers. Therefore, companies should conduct their business within social standards in order not to leave any detrimental influence on the society.
To conclude, it stands to reason that companies always want to maximize their revenue. However, aside from generating money, they should also ensure to run their businesses in a socially responsible manner.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5243902439 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86234577448 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678861788618 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.6201762598 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.9 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188516414981 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714827559196 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737791782954 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114329545439 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344541836696 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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