What are the advantage and disadvantage of leaving your country to live or study abroad?
These days many youths prefer to emigrate abroad for education or finding a decent job. However, what is the advantages and disadvantages of leaving homelands? In this essay, I am going to talk about the positive and negative aspects of migrating from your country to start a new life or study overseas.
First of all, I’m going to define my ideas about the benefits of migration. Migrating will give teenagers the opportunity to study their passion in high ranked universities and became prosperous specialists, which might not be an achievable goal in their native country. By living alone, you will learn how to be independent, and overcome the difficulties in life. As an example, you are responsible for your meals and cleaning up your home. It gives you the chance to see what’s happening outside of your country. You are able to find new friends from various parts of the world and improve your knowledge of different cultures.
On the other hand, leaving your family has some downsides. They are the most important people in everyone’s life who we like to be next to them in our happiness and sadness. In contrast, when you are living far away from them it’s hard to share your feelings. In addition, living alone has its own difficulties. You have to do all the tasks your parents used to do for you. As an example of this, cooking, official works, driving to university or office, cleaning the home, and many other examples. Furthermore, if the formal language of the country you are going, differs from your mother tongue, you have to learn a new language. These could be some of the negative points of emigration and living alone.
To put in a nutshell, as I said, migration has its own hardships and challenges. However, I believe that nothing in life comes easy and without price. These difficulties help you to grow up, become powerful, and be ready for harder situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, in addition, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82515337423 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.697888946 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592024539877 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.70945713 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.65 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256429465918 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727232501983 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085197607982 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150308152687 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113124565456 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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