What difficulties will face your country in the next ten years How can these problems be overcome

Essay topics:

What difficulties will face your country in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

The problem of facing country next ten years which was always debatable has become more contentious with many people claiming that it is hazardous while others disagree. In my opinion, countries are suffering numerous drawbacks with in next 10 years. This essay will explicate the reasons attributing to this trend along with the remedial measures in the looming paragraphs.

Analyzing the statement and explaining further the first and main reason behind this is that, many countries have over population due to the lack of family planning. Besides, unemployment rates is increasing dramatically as over population around the world. For example, a survey done by BD Government in 2021 about 55% of graduates are job less in Bangladesh owing to mass population. Moreover, if any country has been relaying on import rather than export, GDP would be going down and daily expenses will be increasing in next decade. This, It is clearly mentioned that why countries are felt trouble in future.

Step to deal with this problems are many but the most significant ones are not complicated but accessible and practical. Primarily, authorities should be introduced family planning program to people in rural to city area. In addition, family planning are providing information how to prevent early marriage and birth rate. Another pivotal aspect is that governments should create more job for fresher and provide some technical training to street children who are unable to go to school. Furthermore, established more manufacturing industries and export oriented businesses as countries GDP will be growing and unemployment rates are reducing. Hence, people are getting more job and employed in future.

In conclusion, according to the arguments one can reach to a conclusion that the drawbacks of unemployment and over population are too dire to ignore and step need to be taken to tackle this problem with in next ten years.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27687296417 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8397146791 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612377850163 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7090414575 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219279396047 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630980442974 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630889391858 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133862214899 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388918322531 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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