What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?
It is certainly true that living in a small community play an important role in people’s life. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of the development of society makes people tend to move to big cities, as a result, the way people live has changed.
For this reasons why living in a small community gain a lot of advantages. First of all, the number of people is not as much as in a big city, so they are able to get on well with everyone in their regions. For example, people who live and work together in a field, including constructing their homes, hospital, and schools. Therefore, this activity needs cooperation with many people to support each other, so it caused raising close social interaction among them. Secondly, life is very peaceful when the children grow up in the stable environment. Furthermore, there is always someone to look after the children and teach them a good behavior, so children grew up being polite and respectful. Moreover, there was a beautiful environment and fresh air, which was a good place for taking rest and pleasure.
On the other hand, living in a small community it is probably difficult for everyone to build a study environment. The majority of the equipment is limited in school. This means that the study progress of children will be weaker than those in a city.
To conclude, although there is a drawback of living in a small community,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79098360656 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78585745271 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9385298027 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9230769231 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164515595877 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624813487603 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739415463858 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124013445344 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048679241181 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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