Nowadays, thanks to the advance of technology, internet is increasing popular in the world. Undoubtedly, it brings people useful information and abundant entertainment. I therefore agree that there are so much benefits of using internet in the life. I will attempt to outline some key reasons for this.
Firstly and most obviously, Internet play more and more important in work and school. Social media is a main tool to people exchange job and contact to each other. Besides, it is easy to access the useful information to develop company and education. For example, online course is the most favourite ways because students can study wherever and whenever and it is cheaper than offline course. Many enterprises expand their market due to promotion on Google Ads and Youtube.
Secondly, people entertain on the laptop, table tablet in free time because of the internet. The fact that everyday almost people surf the internet to read newspaper, watch football, play video games and even study cooking or playing music. It is now common to see people in square time all looking at their phones or computers.
Finally, people can usually communicate without caring of distant. Interestingly, friends can have a chat everyday through social media although they are on two different continents. As a result, working at home or working for an international company is more popular than before since people talk online on Pcs of mobile phones.
In summary, I would argue that the life of human becomes more development and efficiency due to the invention of Internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...nt. I therefore agree that there are so much benefits of using internet in the life....
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... because of the internet. The fact that everyday almost people surf the internet to read...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12890625 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72067718603 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0757207165 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992826480095 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323057885314 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358588290627 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061062720538 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295215157412 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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