In this day and age, more and more contemporary has been placed on the factors of success in high school. To my prospective, there are personal and social factors have great impact on the high school success.
In terms of the personal factors, students with strong will seem to be successful at academic training. Will power is the golden opportunity for youngsters who thriving toward a better grade in high school. To explain further, it offers students a chance to improve their personal skills, such as being able to manage emotions, cope with stress and build confidence and self-esteem, which is often considered to be the key to a successful academic training. For example, a student lacking confidence have to give a presentation to the crowd, it would be very difficult for him to continue performing fluently because he is under constant pressure.
Regarding social factors, students would be provided with a number of benefits. For example, social factors offer students many opportunities to enhance their interpretation skills, like teamwork or communication skills, which would not only help them in day-to-day interactions but also benefit them at school. Hence, they would know how to beg for helps from others to overcome the setbacks they might face. Besides, the school itself is a deciding factor to students' success at school, such as ,the teachers, the method of instruction and so on. All these factors have a significant impact on the youngsters' success in high school.
From these above mentioned, the conclusion can be drawn that personal and social factors play crucial roles in the victory of high school students. if student is studious and does his best to have academic achievement
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- Films were produced by big companies in the past but today people are able to make a film Do you think this trend is positive or negative 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r to students success at school, such as ,the teachers, the method of instruction ...
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Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
...actors have a significant impact on the youngsters success in high school. From these a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...in the victory of high school students. if student is studious and does his best t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, regarding, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8022858745 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0145796744 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375982758728 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150764942483 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090778049195 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251791211184 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531514122581 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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