When famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the century of internet and technology, we are covered by the massive information coming from plenty of sources. As a result, it is easy to be influenced by others’ opinions or sayings, especially the famous people such as celebrities, actors or music stars. To some extent, I think we should not let these opinions affect our ways of living and thinking.
Firstly, what famous people say are not always reliable and in many cases, they intentionally tell the lies for their own benefits. Nowadays, it is clear that the competition in the society is getting higher and higher. Therefore, some famous people may utilize their popularity by saying something weird or shocked to attract and increase the number of their fans. By this way, they can make their names more well-known as well as secure their positions in the competition of fame.
Secondly, a saying giving by a person is just a personal idea and it only represents and reflects herself or himself. Those opinions are very subjective and probably are only correct in some limited cases. If we just follow without considering carefully, it may lead to many unexpected results. For example, a Vietnamese famous singer used to share that she often skips breakfast in order to maintain her good body shape. Actually, in case a person having stomachache and attempts to follow and practice this method, it will definitely be detrimental to his or her health.
To summarize, it is good to listen to others’ opinions but we should not let them affect our own thinking and lifestyle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97701149425 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77541714993 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.1514421773 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.9230769231 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216794336421 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663937915438 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494598910658 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125319938405 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370487735022 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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