When a person spends most of his or her time working a job with little job satisfaction, their life loses meaning.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, when the world is relentlessly pursuing a nine to five job culture, it become near to impossible task for them to keep their spirits high in those monotonous job routines. Having said that, some tends to lose their purpose of life completely and become lifeless working machines. I strongly agree with this viewpoint and further discussions are made in impending paragraphs.
To begin with, it is all the matter of one's passion and interest, they likely to develop in their respective job. Most of the time, the enthusiasm remains at advance levels, when one's job is coherent to their passions and what they really want to do in their life. In contrast, if any employment is forced on any individual or one has to do it just to earn their livelihood, it becomes undesirable and the reason for oblivion for them.
In addition to this, if someone lacks the clarity of mind about what they want to achieve or have no certain goals, they are most likely to get the work which in turn transform them into obscure and hopeless beings. Moreover, the corporate job culture with no social indulgence and prolong screen adherence also adds to the spark, which hampers the creativity and cognitive thinking of any employee and turn them into an introvert and antisocial person. For instance, a top notch pharma company in India, allure their employees by high incentives for overtime working shifts and enforce them to enhance production.
In crux, awareness and recognition of one's passion and need of exploration of their respective working fields could successfully aid in maintaining the gist of their lives. Also, keeping the right work-life balance in their endeavors would enhance the quality and ultimately fill bliss in any individual's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, thus, as to, for instance, in addition, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0102739726 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66568399789 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2004269298 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273563383375 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104218881102 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639904253449 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163691107537 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515725322376 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.