Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
I strongly disagree with the idea that our lives are less secure without the death penalty. I personally do not think that capital punishment decreases the number of crimes and controls violence.
It is an unethical idea to punish someone with death so that crime would stop and others would not commit crime either. On the other hand, it does not control violence and does not prevent other criminals from committing crime as well. If the person is psychopath and has unhealthy mental status then nothing can stop that person from committing a crime. That type of person should be under control in private areas that are divided for only them. Because, some psychopathic behaviors cannot be treated. But that does not mean killing them would solve the problem.
I agree that there are types of serious crimes that need more heavy punishments than arresting them and then putting them in prison because it would not help to stop these types of criminals. In that position, it appears that the death penalty might be an option, however, from my point of view, there should be other options that are more ethical such as life imprisonment or isolating them from other humans and putting them in special areas for only people that cannot be gain to society, perhaps trying on psychological punishments.
In conclusion, some criminals cannot regret anything they have done, and would even do it over and over again without feeling any emotion. So, in situations like that, even though I do not support the death penalty, capital punishment could be an option yet, otherwise, it is not a considerable thing for other types of criminals since there have been people who were innocent that died to capital punishment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e areas that are divided for only them. Because, some psychopathic behaviors cannot be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, as for, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93103448276 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44981981429 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558620689655 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.839536991 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230504701934 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866264309059 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826751607087 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16926999489 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123046899551 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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