Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the last few years, crime rates have soared significantly. Indeed, there are various types of capital punishment, such as by, giving lethal injection, firing squad, electrocution, hanging, and so on. A growing number of people believe that without death penalty, crime rate will plummet and we will feel insecure. It is there view that, execution must be the primary punishment. I tend to agree to some extent with this idea. I will explain my opinion with relevant examples.
On the one hand, this type of punishment can be true deterrent to would-be murderers from killing people. For instance, executions especially which are painful, humiliating and public may make a sense of horror and tangible intimidation among the criminals. Undeniably, they will think thrice before they will commit crime. Based on data from all 50 states from 1978 to 1997, each state execution deters an average of 14 murders annually. Therefore, most states are embracing "an eye for an eye" and "a death for death" type of justice.
Secondly, it prevents reoffending and offers vindication for victims family. To put it in another way, offender neither remain danger to the public nor to the prison staffs. Over and above that, the punishment tend to be outright closure and justifying to sufferers.
Having said that, death penalty is often regarded as an unconscionable. Take lethal injection for instance. States are often using cocktail
of two drugs that has never been used before for capital punishment. As a consequence, criminals are enduring a longer death and moving more frequently than usual. That is to say, offenders are subject of unnecessary suffering in an execution. Moreover, medical professionals and anaesthesiologists won't allow physicians to participate in this type of execution. All this means that we don't know who is actually performing? Untrained prison officials or doctors performing surreptitiously or execution specialists(Are there over such things) ?
Capital punishment is even more expensive. The intensive jury selection, trials and appeals required in capital cases can take over a decade and run up a huge tab for the state. Inaddition, such prisoners facing execution are kept in separate cells under intense observation, is also immensely costly. For instance, death penalty cost 3 million dollars which was almost 2 million dollars more than when it wasn't sought.
To sum up, although it is a common belief of many people about capital punishment as the major punishment, I personally believe we should look for alternative form of punishment like life imprisonment due to factors like excessive costs and innocent people being executed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37028301887 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96577945081 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 176.041082164 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629716981132 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1654149969 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7037037037 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07407407407 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 20.0 3.9879759519 502% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136309534792 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342965444003 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434641838365 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650257412728 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293494573581 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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