The World is becoming a forest of the building. It is becoming difficult to find trees everywhere. What is the main reason for the global warming? Can you suggest ways, to eradicate global warming?
Nowadays people are live in a cement jungle and it is hard to find a natural place. As this point, many of academic warning due to human's behaviour that destroying nature for their resources will disturb the ecosystem. In this essay, I will identify a reason for global warming and present some possible solutions.
To begin with, many developing countries are becoming industrialized and it impacts on the global environment. For instance, establish of traffics and buildings are major factors of emission and destroying the forests. Moreover, it occurs at a high temperature on worldwide and disasters nature.
In an attempt to tackle these problems, some measures can be put in place by the government and us. First and foremost, the government should introduce the laws to limit emissions and to prevent forests. As well as that, we should use public transport to prevent emission problems. Furthermore, we should implement the Earth day to preserve our nature by planting trees.
To sum up, it can be observed that there are some problems in relation to global warming. However, with the right action and our efforts, these problems of global warming can be resolved.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, as well as that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14507772021 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78714098133 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.4407469595 49.4020404114 31% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.75 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177552999526 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058941942712 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672014285173 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102192679063 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560444164147 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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