The world natural resources are being comsumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?
Nowadays, global natural resources are being tremendously exploit. This prones to many issues to which human being have to confront and thus it requires measurements to be carried out in order to prevent serious consequences.
The excessive natural fuel consumption has two main underlying risks. The first danger emerged is the increase in dependance on fossil fuels. The more resources people consumed, the more fuel is needed to be exploited, which speed up the process of collapsing the natural fuels. Whereas these energy resources are not renewable, we have to face shortage of power not only in the recent time but also in the future. The second stumbling blocks which people have to deal with is the enviromental problems. The burnt of fossil fuels to generate power produce a gigantic amount of greenhouse gas as well as pollution, which worsen the negative impact of climate change to the ecosystems.
It is evident, therefore, that some immediate solutions should be taken by government and international bodies to tackle such problems. Firstly, the resources for creating energy should be shifted from fossil fuels to renewable energy such as wind or sun. The requirement to obtain these types of resource are not hard to approach and the used of renewable resource cause minimal damage to our enviroment as well. Secondly, in order to decrease the dependance of natural resources, people ought to change their lifestyle. For example, instead of travelling to work by buses or cars, it is highly recommended that people should cycle to work or do it on foot. As the result, not only there will be cut down on the consumption of fossil fuels but also our enviroment is keeping safe from contamination.
In conclusion, the overconsumption of natural resources worldwide is already having major impacts and immediate measures are called for in order to mitigate the consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...increase in dependance on fossil fuels. The more resources people consumed, the mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16233766234 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87358756288 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548701298701 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9526849561 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178400731053 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604962109619 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368282532926 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106090438531 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303235014355 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.