Write an essay about the main problems teenagers have in your country. Describe them, and explain their causes and suggest possible solutions.
Nowadays, young people who are teenagers have an important role in the development of a country. In reality, they are facing several problems that may affect their lives. This essay will discuss some roots of the difficulties and give solutions for the problems.
There are two main problems that teenagers are facing. Firstly, young people in Vietnam often lack the knowledge of social science. When they surf the Internet, they usually read news about celebrities, use social network such as Facebook, Zalo and Instagram for their pleasure. They rarely use the Internet to research about the social issues around them. This is very dangerous because if they do not have the proper knowledge of a social issue, they can misunderstand this issue and have a wrong view on it. Secondly, citizens who are teenagers often have unstable personality. They can easily get angered after hearing some critisms from people like their parents. Because of the young age, their behaviour will be unexpected and can lead to the issue that they will commit crimes in the future.
The solution for these problems above must be taken. Firstly, the government should acquire the educational programs to improve the awareness of young people. The programs should be given to students who are in school. The Ministry of Education and Pedagogy can hold competitions to help students enhance their social knowledge. Moreover, there must have a subject about politics given in general education system to help young people have a proper attitude on political issue. Secondly, teachers as well as parents should pay more attention to young students. At their age, teenagers need to be concerned rightly and senior people can help them overcome this difficult period. With all the actions are taken together, we can lead young citizens to the right way.
In conclusion, there are several solutions that may help young people deal with their difficulties. The solutions given above should be taken seriously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: who is a are
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Suggestion:
...who are teenagers have an important role in the development of a country. In real...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... a wrong view on it. Secondly, citizens who are teenagers often have unstable personali...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in general, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18633540373 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53965122104 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524844720497 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5245152582 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5238095238 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162314358074 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536284335276 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532793916808 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103917519555 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054861933913 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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