Writing, reading and maths are the three major subjects. Some people think that computer skills should be added as a fourth subject. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there are widely concerns relating appropriateness about adding computer to new main subjects. While advocates argue that it would has beneficial impacts, some people think only writing, reading and math are enough. Personally, I completely agree with this viewpoint to some extent as in my opinions, which I will discuss now.
On the one hand, firstly, it is an undeniable fact that children expect to get high marks in examination. Thr internet would be a fantastic tool for them, answering their doubts immediately. While preparing a final test, students might struct in difficult lesson. It probably takes more than 1 hours to solve. If they find a solution from online textbooks which could be access although staying at home, they could keep reading books consistently. Secondly, to increase understanding in typical lessons, stimulation on certain programs would reduce potential risks. For example, in chemical science, dangerous experimental of sodium and water can generate critical explosion which makes students injured. This situation could be avoided by doing in computer. Furthermore, with modern globalization, every business needs workers with computer-related skills to drive their works and communicate with the worldwide organization. It is important learning use about sending email or joining video conference. There are a number of significant reasons to instill capability using computer for young peers, ranging from primary school to university.
On the one other hand, opponents reckon that young people should spend valuable time in improvement only three main subjects, without computer, which generally uses in daily life. Computer skills might be suitable for certain students. For instance, children who study about farming or agricultural should learn to utilize computer basically. This means typing essay in Microsoft Word and creating presentation by Powerpoint. Then, they can do it by themselves and this is not necessary to sit in class.
In conclusion, I think computer skills play an important role in making efficient workforces which meet the demand of global growth plan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59567901235 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93136930497 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688271604938 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3129109271 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.65 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221871939988 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535644257397 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552842327613 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140306118321 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729998600663 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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