WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
While it is considered by some people that modern music has a positive impact on adolescence, modern music is thought by others that the effect of it is negative. For me, I believe that modern music is very advantageous for the young if they know how to select what they should listen to and what they shouldn’t.
On the one hand, modern music has been proven by scientists that can help the brain work with high productivity and reduce stress which means make us feel more comfortable and more energetic. In other words, listening to modern music help us relax and give us the energy to do more things. Moreover, when you listen to modern music, your brain starts to generate dopamine in a natural way which can stimulate emotional and cognitive functions of nerves that meaning your brain will be able to work more efficiently.
On the other hand, modern music, nowadays, have lots of offensive words which can make adolescence will be able to be badly affected. Non-selective word usage can change the meaning of the song and make people misunderstand. Impart wrong meaning can unknowingly promote social evils and affect the young generations.
Finally, in my opinion, modern music has a positive effect on the young but if we listen to it without selecting, we will be able to unintentionally impart negative thing in our brain and destroy it. So we need to select it before listen to it.
In conclusion, listening to modern music have lots of benefits if we certainly know how to select it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a natural way" with adverb for "natural"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... your brain starts to generate dopamine in a natural way which can stimulate emotional and cogni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81153846154 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68811486705 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.225855893 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.727272727 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25407612078 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105260551951 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717617295492 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147104299435 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592142330249 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.