You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
In the day and ages, while athletes can train in the building specialised facilities that provied by government to achieve international sports, citilizations do not had the sports facilities to use. Hence, that became to one of the most noticeable issues in some nations. For my perspectives, I halfly agree with the given topic and the reasons will be explained in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, when the government bulding many facilities for athletes, they may get more reputation about sport in the world. For the explain, athlete may improve better and stronger than that of them in the past when training in the specialised facilities instead of normally. That also lead to many merit for that nations when they may get more sponsor from many worldwide sport clubs for athletes in that countries. For example, nowadays, many european countries were focus on spend money and the budget on bulding many center of sports. Hence, they was achieve many medal and training many prospects athletes.
On the other hand, providing sports facilities which citilizations can use also take many merits. Everyone, both old and young can connect with sports so that governments also reduce the budget for medicine because the the healthy of people had improve very much when they playing sports. Besides, that may plummet children who had been passinate about mobilephone, internets. For example, in Vietnam, many sports facilities was building in public such as park, riverside or anywhere we can think in the mind. Hence, citizen who are living in Vietnam have the good healthy and the athletes also training in everywhere they want instead of the specializations facilities which very expensive.
In conclusion, weighing up both sides of argument are the same, spend budget on athletes many very important but on citizen also take many merits. So, I have the halfly agree with the idea that providing sports facilities for everyone or athletes may better.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eputation about sport in the world. For the explain, athlete may improve better and stronge...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun merit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many merits'.
Suggestion: many merits
... instead of normally. That also lead to many merit for that nations when they may get more...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
... many center of sports. Hence, they was achieve many medal and training many prospects ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun medal seems to be countable; consider using: 'many medals'.
Suggestion: many medals
...nter of sports. Hence, they was achieve many medal and training many prospects athletes. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... reduce the budget for medicine because the the healthy of people had improve very much...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... reduce the budget for medicine because the the healthy of people had improve very much...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...e because the the healthy of people had improve very much when they playing sports. Bes...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...e because the the healthy of people had improve very much when they playing sports. Bes...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14641744548 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67746090292 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501557632399 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3100799036 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.133333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246169674274 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982662315623 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862904371365 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172540581881 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450035010608 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eputation about sport in the world. For the explain, athlete may improve better and stronge...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun merit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many merits'.
Suggestion: many merits
... instead of normally. That also lead to many merit for that nations when they may get more...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
... many center of sports. Hence, they was achieve many medal and training many prospects ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun medal seems to be countable; consider using: 'many medals'.
Suggestion: many medals
...nter of sports. Hence, they was achieve many medal and training many prospects athletes. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... reduce the budget for medicine because the the healthy of people had improve very much...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... reduce the budget for medicine because the the healthy of people had improve very much...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...e because the the healthy of people had improve very much when they playing sports. Bes...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...e because the the healthy of people had improve very much when they playing sports. Bes...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14641744548 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67746090292 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501557632399 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3100799036 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.133333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246169674274 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982662315623 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862904371365 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172540581881 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450035010608 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.