You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
It is often argued by many that wealthy people have the options to be helpful for others because they possess lots of money. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this side of the argument as there are other more meaningful ways to reach out for others like physical or mental help for individual people and social work for community.
Monetary help is not the only way through which a person can make a difference in mankind. This is because there is some time in life when an individual need someone probably his family member or simply a friend to be on his or her side. These emotional and mental supports can make the person stronger and he or she can overcome the tough time with remarkable ease. A sick person, for example, who is suffering from cancer and undergoing chemotherapy will crave for the company and emotional support of her or his family and friend than money. Moreover, such action of little kindness can make her whole journey a bit easier and therefore, plays a mentionable part in life.
We can contribute to society through our strong will power to serve the community and thus help others. The reason behind this is everyone living in community is not supposed to be rich in terms of monetary value but the most important thing to consider is their wish to help others. For instance, someone who does not have the ability to donate can serve the community through volunteering; can give their valuable time to serve the people at hospitals, drop in centers, schools and so on. Although it is not comparable to directly hand over money to one but the satisfaction he or she having through this work is huge.
In conclusion, although money can give opportunity to help others, it is not the only way to contribute to a person’s life or community. We can make differences to people’s life by being their side in their needs and also contributing to the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 588, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...y to one but the satisfaction he or she having through this work is huge. In conclu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70658682635 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58223422522 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532934131737 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.69109819 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.923076923 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186543898318 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695994636248 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518306140898 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122935953488 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044788732084 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.