Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age This is called peer pressure Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages
There is a growing recognition that young individuals tend to be impacted by their same-aged people. In my opinion, this deeply rooted phenomenon in societies causes more positive effects than drawbacks.
There are three major pitfalls upon the immature devired from comparisions to their folks. The first point of view is that as acknowledging the success of other, young people may feel inferior to their counterparts and perceive themselves as lossers. This subsequently result in their difficulty to socialize and establish meaningful relationships. An additional point is that, the immature are more likely to be more vunerable by external factors. Thus, pressures from same-aged people may discourage them from achieving their personal goals and even quitting their on-going deeds which hold the key for their later feat in life. Finally, significant amount of stress and anxiety could be greatly attributed to negative impacts from friends that may causes long-term affect on their mental health.
However, contrary to popular belief that benefits from individuals having on each other are tremendous. The first rationale is that youngsters spend most of their time studying and interacting with their peers therefore by looking at other achievements, these young minds tend to immitate their like-minded friends' pattern of behaviors which implies their similiar successes. Secondly, given over-confidence of young individuals, they are encouraged to bridge the gap with their peers in most situations when seeing peers flourishment. More importantly, peer pressures often go hand in hand with competition, the element plays crucial role in any developed civilization, which motivates innovation and productivity leading to posperity of nations.
In the light of these facts, pressure from same-aged friends is one of main motivations to individuals and societies as a whole, albeit there are some minor pitfalls affecting one's life. For me, the trend is irriversable therefore young generation should adopt instead of avoiding it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65584415584 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97022384987 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0400791855 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.428571429 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28500419924 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853677710216 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592095880908 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154075792088 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054903302041 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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