In your view, what is the most important thing for governments to spend money on: education, health, transportation, or something else?Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Nowadays, some people believe that the government should spend money on healthcare and education. Other people believe spend money on transportation or help homeless people that is more significant. In my opinion, I agree that funds should spend on health and education because those are the most key factors.
To begin with, some people do not have enough money to pay for that huge healthcare in some countries. Health is a very significant factor more than anything else because you cannot do anything if you do not have health or become ill. People usually do not have enough money support from the government that causes a number of deaths since healthcare fees become too expensive. For example, in the U.S., the government does not spend money on health areas, so people have to pay all of the fees by themselves, especially people with lower incomes who will get into some trouble paying for it. For these reasons, I think that health is the first important factor that the government should focus on.
Secondly, education plays a key role in everyone’s life, especially for the younger generation. It allows us to make wise decisions and solve problems if people have a higher quality education. Moreover, people can afford their expenses and adopt their children if they get a good job and have a good salary. For example, some countries are getting worse and worse because the population did not have enough education. It will cause increasing criminal activities. For this reason, the government should develop educations.
In conclusion, I feel strongly that health and education are the important factors that the governments should spend money on it because healthcare is too expensive and education is important to develop for the younger generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10996563574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68931028189 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491408934708 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3588663528 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203687243058 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794768898235 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569768517032 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145381061149 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433080304262 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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