Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life, some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one, Discuss both views and include your own opinion.
Commercials are scattered in our environment through different means of communication, like T.V., radio, newspapers and it is difficult to ignore them for everyone. It is argued by some individuals that these advertisements play a constructive role in our survival. Whereas, others do not agree and believe in the opposite way. Before reaching a conclusion, this essay will discuss both the aspects in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, advertisements are essential to becoming aware of the product available in the market. Therefore, customers do need commercials for easy access to the needs of their daily life. Advertisements are valuable resources of information about the range and quality of products from different companies and help customers to make a choice according to their needs. For instance, ads of condoms are essential in our life, such advertisements not only offer the product details but also the necessity of product while having sex. Hence, advertisements play a vital role in our life.
However, sometimes these ads become a burden for the people because of unnecessary expenditure on purchase. For example, television commercials of toys keep children tempted to make a purchase and parent are forced to buy these toys for them which have a little value in practical life. As a result, advertisements create a bad environment in society by making people addicted to doing excess shopping. Consequently, marketing of such products should be banned or limited in public, so that customers can make a purchase according to their needs and budget.
To conclude, although, commercials have a pivotal role in educating customers about the product in the market, I believe these advertisements must be regulated and controlled through a government body so that consumers can do voluntary shopping.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at consumers can do voluntary shopping.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4181184669 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16934916445 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1125708408 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.071428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132119284503 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542694779353 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042050302358 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808921423483 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405505717264 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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