After leaving school or university,young people should choose a job or carer that
they love,rather than one that pays the best salary
To what extand do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays a huge amount of young generation choose well-paid job instead of
their interests and lovely job or carer. I tend to disagree with this opinion.
In this essay I will explain why.
To my mind it has more drawbacks than benefits. Firstly everybody have dream job
over the years they want to achieve their aim which is on target but after graduating
if they do not do their dream job it would be bad because in every work they are unable
to work from heart. Besides all, people have ability related to their dream job not to well-paid
job. In addition owing of a lot of money young generation lose valuable interpersonal skills.
Alternatively some teenagers are need to find money after finishing school. In that kind of
situation interests is not matter due to money is first them. On the other hand for achieving goals
they appear with obstacles and if they can not beat it consequence they give up and feel unlucky
for that they begin to work.
On the whole at the present majority of people prefer well-paid job owing of expensive life cost.
To sum up prefering job which is comfort and easy is better. Firstly they work on their lovely atmosphere.Secondly they do everything with good willings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, kind of, on the whole, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83098591549 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60578183397 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.6951693347 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1538461538 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225894834457 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702768854032 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507561650604 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754662148432 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436191502324 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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