In ancient times, people grow crops in their local fields and consume it locally in their areas. But now the globalization has changed the world and made it possible for country to export their fruits and veggies to a different country through cargo air. Now people from any particular region can taste any food which is not available in their area, but it cost a fortune to import food from a different part of the world.
At the outset, there are numerous ways how commercial air service of food made farmers' life hassle free and ours enjoyable, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it is now possible for anyone to enjoy any fruit, veggie or food that someone used to wish few decades ago. Not everyone is lucky enough to have all kind of fruits or vegetables in his country, in this case, air cargo is no less than a blessing to supply those items to that particular city or country. For instance, Avocado is not grown in Pakistan, but it is still available in supermarkets of Pakistan because it is imported from Australia. Therefore, it is not possible to deny the importance of air shipment in fresh food industry.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of air cargo services for fresh fruits, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that the cost of transportation is so high that most of the times it becomes almost impossible for an ordinary man to afford those vegetables or fruits. Take the Kiwi for example, it is so expensive in India that only upper class people can afford it, middle class man check his pocket twice before thinking to buy it. This is why, it is indispensable to look for other options as well to make all kind of fruits and vegetables available everywhere for everyone.
To put into a nutshell, the importance of air services to export fruits and vegetables is so high but the price it comes with should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64825581395 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57904873175 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526162790698 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5980356995 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.363636364 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2727272727 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155496953413 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628967591558 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556745591786 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104090548302 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385525602471 0.056905535591 68% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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