All education (primary, secondary and further education) should be free to all people and paid and managed by the government.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Education to all people either at primary secondary or higher stages should be free or not is actually a controversial topic or discussion. As it may be different for different people depending on their choices and definitely on their social status also.

The people who think from Government’s point of view , it can be really difficult to maintain this law and to execute it as it will cost a huge burden on Government shoulders. They will have to arrange for huge fundings to achieve it and at the end the same cost will come to the normal people in the form of taxes.
But if we think as a normal person , definitely I would also like to have free education and all expenses related to education of my children managed by the government.As now a days cost of living is increasing day by day and also cost of education is also increasing. It is becoming difficult to have more children because we are scared of the expense we have to bear for them in the form of education and their social welfare. Definitely increased cost of education is scaring normal parents like me that how we will manage advance studies for our children.
In my opinion , i think that it will be great if government will at least pay half of the amount required for children education. In that way it will be beneficial for both as parents will get a relief and they can save more for other things and Government will also play a good role for the society

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, really, second, so, at least, i think, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52107279693 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68626578639 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498084291188 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4437340095 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.111111111 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183999696028 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876625191921 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089253884604 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11806381159 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818622824401 0.056905535591 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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