Animal testing may be necessary, but we need to be merciful. do you agree or disagree
It is argued that millions of animals are suffering from intolerable pain and death because of scientific research of multiple products like cosmetic, drugs, food additives and other chemical products on them. Some people think that animal testing is necessary, while others refute it. Over the course of this essay will provide reason for having this point of view.
There are various reasons why people believe that animals testing are indispensable. The preliminary reason is that animal share many features with human, so that scientist use animals to test the safety and effectiveness of newly operating technique. For example Human has inherited some traits from monkey. Furthermore, without animal testing, many new products would be extremely unsafe.
On the other hand, people concern that due this chemical testing animals have to endure cruelly and unnecessarily pain. They do not believe that every drugs need to be tested on animal with in huge knowledge of database and modern computer terminology. There is no need to test no-essential products on animals such as cosmetic, shampoos, soaps and cleaning products because this method of testing may cause irritation or corrosion to the skin or eye on animals. Moreover, the government of India has been announced a ban on cosmetic products’ testing on animals since November 2014.
Having considered a range of arguments, I have concluded that millions of animals who are using for testing should be treated with the minimum suffering. The animals testing should be avoidable for non-essential products such as cosmetics products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al products such as cosmetics products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41434262948 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76556016794 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.349932537 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270892147681 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104126732783 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681040991773 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169912254435 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618084662763 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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