Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In a technology-driven world, people can work and study from home because of the advantages of technology. Some people think it is a positive development,
while others claim that it exerts devastating effects on children. I agree that it has both pros and cons.
On one hand, working and studying from home is a perfect choice for the people who have a weak immune system, and easily get diseases due to the fact that it not only protects them from catching a contagion but also protects the people around them such as colleagues, classmates or friends. Take coronavirus as an example. The virus spreads all over the world with terrifying speed and kills older and ill people. Social distancing is the way to survive through this epidemic which supports the idea of working online. Moreover, there is no doubt that technology makes things cheaper and more convenient. For example, driving to your company to work and sitting in traffic jams, wastes time and money. Now they just need to sit at the desk in front of the computer.
Sadly enough, staying at home for a long time causes lots of problems such as depression, autism and gradually damages communication skills. Research shows that 3 out of 10 adults and 5 out of 10 children who worked and studied at home more than 30 hours per week became depressed. Furthermore, the Internet, which includes lots of uncensored, pornographic and violent scenes, not only distracts children from learning but also harms their growth.
In view of what was mentioned above, obviously, working and studying online has both advantages and disadvantages but somehow the advantages win out.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... catching a contagion but also protects the people around them such as colleagues, classmates or frien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75443737433 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653284671533 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6176906084 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302126909922 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795865745571 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073387353659 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14030416677 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923961797037 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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