Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A considerable number of people assert that there is a need for certain protocols for artists to encourage reasonable creativity, while others are staunch opponents of the aforementioned notion claiming that there ought to be complete freedom of expression for an artist to express their ideas. I am in strong support of the former view as certain guidelines are necessary for harmony in society.
While some say freedom is obligatory for art and painting to flourish, there is a need to have a few rules and regulations devised by the government all over the globe in order to have a check on art creators. To give an example, there are few forms of art that are unsuitable for the children that should follow the protocols during creation and distribution. In addition, few graffiti incites violence and fuel hate among the population, disrupting the bonding of the society and nation.
Another point to consider that few art creators create cartoons in the name of religious figures, affecting the sentiments of the religious population, leading to mass protests on the streets. Cartoons of religious figures in past, for instance, had developed a negative impression on the few sections of the society, resulting in the bombing of the magazine office and the loss of lives of artists. Hence, it is mandatory for the government to come up with censorship on the art, and ban a few of them, if required.
In conclusion, although few individuals state that the art creators need complete freedom as it encourages creativity, I am an adamant supporter of the view that censorship is the need of the hour as it will promote harmony among people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
... streets. Cartoons of religious figures in past, for instance, had developed a negative...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97111913357 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88814079372 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527075812274 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4682195446 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7777777778 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146316387562 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537757875305 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677689640578 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909032777077 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630930443018 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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