Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Stardom which is achieved by limited people and after being a star, hardly anyone can live carefree life, rather they become confined in a colorful world where anything can happen. A movie star or a sport’s icon has limited personal life, this can be a drawback, additionally, they always have to face psychological pressure. However, a celebrity enjoys more economical benefit and can keep contribution in social development. It seems to me that being a movie star or a famous sports’ personality can bring more benefits than occurring many problems.
Primarily, personal life always get priority to everyone and it is possible to maintain by general people except the publicly famous figures. Because, wherever they move, people love to see their activities. For instance, Tom Cruise, a famous Hollywood movie star, once went to a shop to but a dress for her daughter, but after reaching there, his fans started to take photo which made impossible for him to buy anything.
Furthermore, psychological pressure is very common for a celebrity because he/she has to compete with others to keep his/her position secure. Any wrong attempts can alter any stars position anytime. As an example, a singers’ situation can be mentioned where he failed to maintain his stardom because of negligence to give audience better songs and in this circumstance, his competitor gave some good songs and became a star.
On contrary, economical benefit is the biggest benefit of being a celebrity. Generally, a star charges a large amount of money for their public appearance. Chiritiano Ronaldo, a famous Portuguese football player, can be a good example of this. Whenever posts any photo of him in instagram, he charges more than a million dollars.
Additionally, for the social development, being a movie or sports star is an advantage. Amitav Bacchan, an Indian actor, promotes an advertisement regarding the importance of toilet cleanliness and general people, at least, come to know the significance of this because of him where other formula of promoting this message has not worked effectively.
In summary, being a celebrity has both advantages and disadvantages. Though, personal life and mental health is affected because of this, but economical solvency and opportunity to work for social development may be a motivation. Stardom brings problems in life, but I think, it carries more benefits than anything else.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27390180879 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99317395626 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568475452196 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6804577511 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.421052632 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279087032215 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950613614927 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085207568536 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144752646256 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977514063358 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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