Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Individual information is very important to understand the nature of job seeker but recruiters also need to ensure the protection of this data which, in reality, does not happen on regular basis. In my opinion, individual data, which is sensitive, is not wise to bring to light. In this writing, I will analyze both positive and negative views regarding this matter.
Primarily, job applicant’s personal facts are asked to give by the company as it is interested to know about the attributes of a contender they are recruiting. For example, if an aspirant loves to travel frequently and he applied for the position of a security person then it may not be suitable for him. On contrary, institution comes to various facts about an employee which helps to distribution of tasks as well. So, individual data is necessary in such kinds of circumstances.
On the other hand, revealing individual information can create lot of problems as well. For instance, in present time, we need to give our own information to open a bank account and credit or debit card is provided from this financial institution. If, somehow, from office individual info is stolen by wrong people then it will be a great hazard. For this reason, if security is not beyond doubt then it is necessary to conceal self - data.
To conclude, employers need to think about the information they really need to know about an applicant and based of this their job application form can be designed. Many experts will give various prospective regarding this matter but most important thing is the protection of individual data. I think it is not necessary to ask for personal data instead institution can take the copy of national identity card which is a very strong personal article.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, regarding, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96949152542 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88692266924 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552542372881 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6105621586 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228428381071 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07248380671 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518216240987 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137354318878 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381347217816 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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