being a celebrity such as famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits.
do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or more problem?
A celebrity works hard to reach a certain heights in his genre and once he become famous he constantly strive hard to the retain the same place. Under any circumstances, almost everything has two sides, just like a coin, and being famous is no different. It has always been a debatable topic whether having fame is a blessing or a curse. As far as I am concerned, I would scrutinize both aspects before reaching to any conclusion.
Firstly, let us look at the negative side of being celebrity. As the majority of world follows film stars and sports-persons and consider them as their idol; few of them are crazy about them. Those fans, for instance, always want to show their love with the extreme which sounds more like madness such as writing a letter with blood or tries to trespass into his or her house. Celebrities are often being troubles with annoying phone calls and even stalked by strangers. Secondly, once you are a celebrity, there is no personal space or social life; media always seeks for an opportunities to capture private or rather say paparazzi moments. For example, even the most intimate events in one's life like weddings, celebrities are often intrigued by media photographers to have a glance for television ratings. Therefore, fame comes with a manifolds of inconvenience.
Conversely, the other side of being famous is glorious at all level. Everyone wants to be a special person and celebrity status comes with numerous added benefits. One of the biggest advantage is the money, celebrities earns a huge amount of money in comparison to the people in other industries. They can buy whatever they have wished for, they can travel around the world wherever they want. Moreover, being popular comes with a great reputation, as their fans are aware of the fact that they have strive hard to reach at the top. For example, Movie stars are often recognized for their work with prestigious awards which are well known and has a great importance.
To sum up, being celebrity is not a piece of cake, still being someone's role model can be a biggest achievement of life. Even though, everything comes at a cost, in my opinion, being celebrity has more advantages as compared to its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'height'?
Suggestion: height
...celebrity works hard to reach a certain heights in his genre and once he become famous ...
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Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'strives'.
Suggestion: strives
...and once he become famous he constantly strive hard to the retain the same place. Unde...
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Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ome famous he constantly strive hard to the retain the same place. Under any circumstances...
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Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an opportunity' or simply 'opportunities'?
Suggestion: an opportunity; opportunities
... or social life; media always seeks for an opportunities to capture private or rather say papara...
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Line 3, column 689, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ample, even the most intimate events in ones life like weddings, celebrities are oft...
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Line 3, column 837, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a manifold' or simply 'manifolds'?
Suggestion: a manifold; manifolds
...ion ratings. Therefore, fame comes with a manifolds of inconvenience. Conversely, the ot...
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Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'strived', 'striven'.
Suggestion: strived; striven
...ns are aware of the fact that they have strive hard to reach at the top. For example, ...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... still being someones role model can be a biggest achievement of life. Even thoug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8654353562 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73283933479 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585751978892 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7140846848 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0526315789 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.10526315789 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250737062742 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724793029177 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605947220866 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155724891702 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616618407293 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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